The blue sky
In the sky there's a sun that looks like a golden ball.The stars are shiny like crystals in the dark sky.
The clouds in the sky look like candy floss.Lighting in the dark looks like a glowing lines coming write from the clouds.The moon looks a sort of shape that looks like a glowing light the changes shapes.
The big blue sky looks like a big huge wave thats above every one.Some birds that fly in the sky look like planes.Shooting stars in the dark fells like fire across my face.
This is some great descriptive writing Kaunteya. I can imagine the sky from what you have written. I particularly like the sentence - The Big Blue Sky looks like a big huge wave...I think it can look like that too. Good work
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Manaia and i really like your thinking of things i can tell that the you are a smart and resisponceble person by the way you say things
ReplyDeleteHi Kaunteya its Kay-lee and I love your post and and the line that you rote is good the one that sed THE STARS ARE SHINY LIKE CRYSTALS IN THE DARK SKY put some picks in next time
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