I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kaunteya this is Isabella i like how you told us how much stars there are in the hole universe even I don't know how much there are and maybe next time you can put your writing bigger and do more than one slide.
Kia ora, Kaunteya, Its Mikayla. This is cool! But I don't think that there are 300 sextillion stars, I think there are a whole lot more stars out there. But next time put some fulstops and commas, so your work looks tidier. Anyway, Bye!
Kia ora Kaunteya. It’s Anyah From Paihia School. I am a year 6 student. I never knew that there was 300 sextillion stars in the universe. Right now I’m thinking are you really sure that it is true? Where did you get that information? I really like how you explained that you agreed with the information 300 sextillion stars. Anyway great work keep it up.
Kia Ora Kaunteya, my name is Payton, I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I never thought that there was so many stars in the universe. Did you know there’s more stars than grains of sand? Where did you find your information ( did you make sure it was true)? Well anyways, keep the great work. Just a quick heads up, it would be a bit better if you could post sooner, or even just post more things.
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hi my name is Ethan from blaketown school and I did not know there was 300'000'000'000'000'000'00'00'00 stars that crazy well i'm heading off bye.
ReplyDeleteThanks! (^^) It really is true search it up.
DeleteHi Kaunteya this is Isabella i like how you told us how much stars there are in the hole universe even I don't know how much there are and maybe next time you can put your writing bigger and do more than one slide.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Kaunteya, Its Mikayla. This is cool! But I don't think that there are 300 sextillion stars, I think there are a whole lot more stars out there. But next time put some fulstops and commas, so your work looks tidier. Anyway, Bye!
ReplyDeleteI am jrae I like it but how did you now how meny
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kaunteya. It’s Anyah From Paihia School. I am a year 6 student. I never knew that there was 300 sextillion stars in the universe. Right now I’m thinking are you really sure that it is true? Where did you get that information? I really like how you explained that you agreed with the information 300 sextillion stars. Anyway great work keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kaunteya, my name is Payton, I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I never thought that there was so many stars in the universe. Did you know there’s more stars than grains of sand? Where did you find your information ( did you make sure it was true)? Well anyways, keep the great work. Just a quick heads up, it would be a bit better if you could post sooner, or even just post more things.
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting, keep up the good work.