the haunted marshmallow

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The haunted marshmallow

Once upon a time it was a dark and spooky night and there was a little boy that had marshmallows on a STICK. Then there came a big, fat ,ugly, mad, lizard the boy didn't realize that there was something that no one has ever seen standing right behind him. He wakx the marshmallows on the stick at the monster in the face.When the monster saw the marshmallow on a stick the boy new that he wanted some because he was looking at the marshmallow. He gave him some by throwing them in his mouth.The monster wanted more so he kept on doing heaps of tricks so he can get heaps of marshmallows.There was one more marshmallow in the boy's hand. When the Monster saw the marshmallow in the boys hand the monster opened his mouth so he can have it then  his arm.So there was no more so the monster poled a nice face just right! away the monster just got really angry then tried to eat him!!!.But when the boy hidden behind a marshmallow packet the boy ran all the way out of the forest when he ran away the monster pulled a weird face.