I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You have done a good job with your stick figures Kaunteya. I like that you would help someone if they hurt their leg. Next time you should make your text a little bigger as I found it quite hard to read.
hi kaunteya taking cerr of other i like that. and i like that you wer trying to do your animaition it wiil be better if change the backround. by tini st bernadetts school
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You have done a good job with your stick figures Kaunteya. I like that you would help someone if they hurt their leg. Next time you should make your text a little bigger as I found it quite hard to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Sonny here i like what you did with the caring for other slide the best slide I ever seen and I also like attimation on it.
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HI this is bailey from Gilberthorpe school I like your caring for other it is neat work.
ReplyDeletehi kaunteya taking cerr of other i like that. and i like that you wer trying to do your animaition it wiil be better if change the backround. by tini st bernadetts school
ReplyDeleteHey Kaunteya nice work on your caring for others it look like it was me and you playing nice work I hope. see you next time bye.
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