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Monday, April 11, 2016

on Monday after morning tea we had to get in our togs and take are shoes with us. we all had to put our shoes by the cones outside the the pool gates. everyone sat down by the pool. then we hoped in it was so freezing cold. after we hoped out we put our shoes on then we ran out the FIELD. Dani came first kevin came seconed I came 3rd then the ran for lunch.
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 11, 2016 at 2:43 PM

    good job

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  2. Miss MorganApril 11, 2016 at 4:23 PM

    What were you doing? Maybe give your work a title? Awesome sentences! your fullstops are in the right places!!!

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  3. AnonymousMay 10, 2016 at 11:58 AM

    Thats cool Kaunteya! I like it so much!

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  4. AnonymousMay 10, 2016 at 11:58 AM

    that's cool kaunteya nice work.

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  5. AnonymousJune 3, 2016 at 4:12 PM

    weren't you meant to say the bell rung but good job

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  6. Miss MorganJune 20, 2016 at 7:53 PM

    This is a great recount Kaunteya! I would love to see some more writing on here!

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  7. AnonymousAugust 6, 2016 at 7:53 PM

    does it make sense?!

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2016 at 10:09 AM

    Hi Sonny here I like what you did but next time you should put a title next time, but that was a good piece of writing.
    bye!

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