I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kaunteya, I like your animation drawing of the cannon and marshmallows. Next time, It would be great if your text could tell viewers a little more about what you are trying to illustrate by firing marshmallows. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi Kaunteya,
ReplyDeleteI like your animation drawing of the cannon and marshmallows. Next time, It would be great if your text could tell viewers a little more about what you are trying to illustrate by firing marshmallows. Thanks for sharing.