I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteHi its me Shiakrn I find a bit hard to read the words do re can you fix that up.
ReplyDeleteNo worries I will fix it when i get to it ok. Thanks for commenting on this animation. bye.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kaunteya your can try to change the font but other there good jod
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Ok I will change it when I get to it ok. Thanks for commenting. Bye.
DeleteHi its Emalea.
ReplyDeleteWhy did the moon disappear halfway through the animation?
Maybe next time you can make it is bit slower?
Ok I will try and fix it up. I think I might of it a bit wrong with the moon.Thanks for commenting anyway. Bye.
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